My friend wrote this story about two chobots. Do you like it?

Chapter 2. Attempt of an armistice

After the Nichos had destroyed the planet, both Nichos and Chobots have been lost in the Universe.
They was wandering on the fragments of their former planet, using Cho energy for completely different purposes.
Chobots were building up the cities, decorating all around, and painting everything in bright colors.
Even knowing their planet was shattered into pieces Chobots were glad to be alive.
They thought “If we’ll be together, everything will be alright!” They were very cheerful and peaceful people.
But Evil Nichos were absolutely opposite. They were trying to find some new ways to use the Cho energy.
Nichos were wandering in space, destroying everything on their way.
And once two young Chobots named Flick and Lilli decided to do something that has never been done before!
They boarded on their spaceship and flew off to find Evil Nichos. These two Chobots were very kind, naive and happy.
(Maybe even more than other ones, if you could imagine it.)
“We will bring the peace back again and our parents will be proud of us!” Flick said.
“Not just our mom and dad! Everyone will know our names, we’ll be famous in a whole Universe!” Lilli answered with a happy smile.
They smiled and waved good-by to their house and left for their journey.
They wandered some days in space before they found traces of the Evil Nichos.
Flick and Lilly noticed fragments of Chobots’ spaceship.
“Oh, it’s so sad. What has happened here?” Lilly asked quietly.
“I don’t know” her brother answered. They were scared.
“Let’s come closer” Lilli whispered.
They came closer to the ship and saw a sign on it. The sign said “Funny Flight”.
“Where is everybody?” Flick wondered.
They have moored to the ship and came on a board.
“Hey? Is there anybody here?..” Flick asked.
Suddenly they heard a joyful shout and saw two Chobots running to them with smiles on their faces.
“Oh, we’re so glad you’re here! We’ve almost lost our hope to be found!” the younger Chobot started to speak quickly.
“We were coming back home, when suddenly we were attacked by Evil Nichos’ ship!
They left us here, and our spaceship was broken!
We thought we would never see our home again” said second Chobot loudly.
“It must be a miracle that you are here,” said the younger Chobot. “My name is Phil, by the way.
And this is my father Kili.”
“My name is Flick, and she’s my sister Lilli, nice too meet you” Flick said, shaking Phils’ hand.
“Come on, let’s go home now!” Kili said.
“Sure!” said Flick and looked into his sisters’ eyes as if he wanted to tell her “We’ll try our luck some other time”.
“Well, we have saved two lives, it’s a good start,” Flick thought. “But next time we’ll find Nichos...”
“You know what??? We have awesome news!” Phil exclaimed.
“We have found the Blue Planet!” there was a wide smile on his face.

To be continued...